Positive Feedback: Excellent Narrative, Iconography, Characters and Setting. Usp was good, creative, wide appeal, good visual presentation,good tagline and marketing ideas.
Things to Improve:Cut down detail on narrative for the exam.
Character profiles.
Secondary Audience
Narrative Techniques
Tidy Up Narrative at the end so it makes more sense
Changes below in red (Narrative Techniques and Plot Changes on second page)
Thursday, 3 March 2011
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Posted by The Latymer School at 01:58
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